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Josh_Emerton
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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:17 am

ClubCJ is a club dedicated to owners of 2008+ 'CJ' Lancers.
We are a community designed to help, share and provide tips for one another, as well as general discussion.
For a true owners club dedicated to your car, visit www.ClubCJ.net - The CJ Lancer Club.
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:25 am

very good
i like it!
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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:29 am

LOl i'm in a writing mood today....Did a 7 1/2 page english essay todayand have another one on Double Jeopardy (legal) 2moro...
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:31 am

ok i will put it in,
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Postby nickbutterz » Fri Nov 07, 2008 6:41 am

looks pretty good
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Postby Vaelehn » Fri Nov 07, 2008 11:10 am

Josh_Emerton wrote:ClubCJ is a club dedicated to owners of 2008+ 'CJ' Lancers.
We are a community designed to help, share and provide tips for one another, as well as general discussion.
For a true owners club dedicated to your car, visit www.ClubCJ.net - The CJ Lancer Club.

I dunno about the word tips though... Thats the only thing that threw me off from this but other then that I like it. and you missed an "," lol. So maybe this instead? Maybe its just me but for some reason tips just isn't doing it. Not that its my choice or anything :)

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Postby momo » Fri Nov 07, 2008 12:43 pm

looks nice =] ba yeh change the word share to join, sounds better ^^
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 12:46 pm

nickbutterz wrote:looks pretty good

you should know, lol.
thanks again nick.
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 12:50 pm

ok this is it.........

ClubCJ is a club dedicated to owners of 2008+ 'CJ' Lancers.
We are a community designed to help, share, and provide insightful advice for one another, as well as general discussion.
For a true owners club dedicated to your car, visit www.ClubCJ.net - The CJ Lancer Club.

is everyone happy with that, is the punctuation correct? lol.
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Postby Vaelehn » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:50 pm

Yea punctuation is good. lol :) Looks good. I can deal with the run-on sentence haha. Lets start printing!
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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:20 pm

WHERE did I miss a comma Vaelehn? If you are referring to the one after 'share' and before 'and', there should NOT be one there...who puts a comma before 'and'?
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:31 pm

ok...................................again,

ClubCJ is a club dedicated to owners of 2008+ 'CJ' Lancers.
We are a community designed to help, share and provide insightful advice for one another, as well as general discussion.
For a true owners club dedicated to your car, visit www.ClubCJ.net - The CJ Lancer Club.

now is that it.........
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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 7:47 pm

YES. +1 trillion. lol....
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Postby Vaelehn » Sat Nov 08, 2008 1:39 am

Josh_Emerton wrote:WHERE did I miss a comma Vaelehn? If you are referring to the one after 'share' and before 'and', there should NOT be one there...who puts a comma before 'and'?

yes there should be! anytime you list in excess of 2 you use comma's even when your useing the word and. unless my english teachers lied to me my whole life :? But either way its not a huge deal. Unless the person is an English major I don't think they will notice or care.
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