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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:14 am

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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:21 am

Just couple of points.

In the text under the picture

From 'Share' replace with 'share with other owners of the superb CJ Lancer'?

Decapitalise 'Join'?

Decapitalise 'Amazing Car Club Dedicated' and 'The' in the same line?

Can anyone think of a better word for 'amazing'?

Just my opinion, don't need to heed it if ya dont want to.
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:21 am

Ar'well
it was just an idea anyway!!!
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:25 am

Josh_Emerton wrote:Just couple of points.

In the text under the picture

From 'Share' replace with 'share with other owners of the superb CJ Lancer'?

Decapitalise 'Join'?

Decapitalise 'Amazing Car Club Dedicated' and 'The' in the same line?

Can anyone think of a better word for 'amazing'?

Just my opinion, don't need to heed it if ya dont want to.

OK Josh,
we can change it!!!!
i'll de-capitilse you in a minute lol.
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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:26 am

I think you mean decapitate. Oh. Bugger.

I was just suggesting its up 2 u lol
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:33 am

Mattigins wrote:maybe put "your car is wanted"

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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:34 am

^^ +1
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Postby Vaelehn » Fri Nov 07, 2008 1:56 am

How come some of the "The" is capitalized and some aren't? Maybe "ClubCJ is a Dedicated Car Club for the CJ Lancer. We are Here to Help & Share Knowledge Throughout the CJ Community. Come Join us at www.ClubCJ.net The Best CJ Lancer Club Around." I know I changed it a little but I think it sounds a little better this way. Just my opinion. However even if you don't change it you need to keep the grammar / capitalization the same way throughout the entire banner. Capitalization is fine but THE AND AN OR BUT IS TO ARE A (with is iffy it can go either way depending on who you talk to... thats why I left it out (all connector words)) should never be capitalized unless they all are. Grammatically speaking. :) Just my 2 cents.
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:01 am

ok sweet i will change it!!
any more ideas????? Anyone!!!!
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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:10 am

Get rid of CJ Community?
And maybe..just maybe, an explanation of CJ for those who dont know it? Old fogies basically.
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Postby Ozie » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:13 am

give me the wording josh!! or someone!
cmon this is a group effort!
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Postby Josh_Emerton » Fri Nov 07, 2008 2:15 am

I mean like, replace with 'other CJ Lancer owners'
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